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	<title>Comments on: In an attempt to increase the quality of writing, I give you&#8230;</title>
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		<title>By: Kerri</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kerri</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Nov 2007 10:16:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Since I've never read (to my knowledge) anything else by the author, taking the poem all by itself... yeah, it is sort of depressing. It lacks hope. He builds things up and then ends with things like 'tomorrow dies' or 'wakes to weep'. Not exactly something you'd want to read at a Christening or a wedding.

I get that mutability can cycle, but his changes ultimately lead to something negative rather than something hopeful or inspiring. It says a lot about how what we think, dream, and believe is always better than reality, which is true, but as an unchanging conclusion. 

It's that attitude that marks it depressing for me. You could argue that the last stanza advises to be thankful for what you have while you have it, but nothing in the poem suggests that you're in control of what you feel and memories can be happy rather than longing.

I suppose what's going on in the world right now sort of skews things for me. Thinking of a time when we didn't have a billion dollar deficit, kids and the elderly giving up food and clothing for their medication, all the fighting and the nuclear talks, the pressure environmentally to do what we can to keep the planet from turning to a huge ball of slush garbage... It's always going to be better in retrospect. My social studies teacher once asked us if we ever wondered why no one ever said the world was in a 'Golden Age' till after the fact.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Since I&#8217;ve never read (to my knowledge) anything else by the author, taking the poem all by itself&#8230; yeah, it is sort of depressing. It lacks hope. He builds things up and then ends with things like &#8216;tomorrow dies&#8217; or &#8216;wakes to weep&#8217;. Not exactly something you&#8217;d want to read at a Christening or a wedding.</p>
<p>I get that mutability can cycle, but his changes ultimately lead to something negative rather than something hopeful or inspiring. It says a lot about how what we think, dream, and believe is always better than reality, which is true, but as an unchanging conclusion. </p>
<p>It&#8217;s that attitude that marks it depressing for me. You could argue that the last stanza advises to be thankful for what you have while you have it, but nothing in the poem suggests that you&#8217;re in control of what you feel and memories can be happy rather than longing.</p>
<p>I suppose what&#8217;s going on in the world right now sort of skews things for me. Thinking of a time when we didn&#8217;t have a billion dollar deficit, kids and the elderly giving up food and clothing for their medication, all the fighting and the nuclear talks, the pressure environmentally to do what we can to keep the planet from turning to a huge ball of slush garbage&#8230; It&#8217;s always going to be better in retrospect. My social studies teacher once asked us if we ever wondered why no one ever said the world was in a &#8216;Golden Age&#8217; till after the fact.</p>
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		<title>By: kilian</title>
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		<dc:creator>kilian</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Nov 2007 16:03:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You think so?  I'm writing a short paper on that very poem...which is why I posted it.  I'm not sure it is entirely depressing...the crux of my argument is, essentially, that while the specific lines of the poem tend toward the depressing, the idea of mutability is such that, given time, all things will cycle back to the good.  

I guess, in part, my theory comes from having read a lot more of Shelley's stuff recently and I don't see him as a pessimist.  He certainly "felt" his emotions strongly.  But he also took up a number of social/political causes.  In that regard, then, I can't really view anything he wrote as ultimately defeatist.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You think so?  I&#8217;m writing a short paper on that very poem&#8230;which is why I posted it.  I&#8217;m not sure it is entirely depressing&#8230;the crux of my argument is, essentially, that while the specific lines of the poem tend toward the depressing, the idea of mutability is such that, given time, all things will cycle back to the good.  </p>
<p>I guess, in part, my theory comes from having read a lot more of Shelley&#8217;s stuff recently and I don&#8217;t see him as a pessimist.  He certainly &#8220;felt&#8221; his emotions strongly.  But he also took up a number of social/political causes.  In that regard, then, I can&#8217;t really view anything he wrote as ultimately defeatist.</p>
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		<title>By: Kerri</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kerri</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Nov 2007 07:41:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Beautiful in prose, execution, and tempo, but... ultimately depressing.</description>
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